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Aralishia - February 14, 2008 01:02 AM (GMT)
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Moon Stone Necklace
The stones of this necklace they glow softly and increases the wearer's light radius in the dark. When touched by moonlight they glow even brighter.


'They' is a grammatical error, and 'increases' should be 'increase', unless you are referring to the necklace as the subject instead of the stones. :blink:

:)
~Ara

Aloric - February 14, 2008 02:15 AM (GMT)
Thank you, this correction has been made.




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